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Day 52: Calypso continued November 6, 2009

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1. We passed back memoirs. I’m so sorry it took a month to grade these writings, but they were truly wonderful. I wanted to be able to write comments for each student, so it took some time. Students signed up on a list to say that they wanted to be published in our class collection. All students wishing to publish should sent their memoir as an attachment to dsapublishing@gmail.com. Any students interested in joining the editing team also signed up today. I’d like to get these edited for Christmas, but we’ll see how it goes. With so many people interested in helping out, we might zoom through this! I’ll also need students who know how to use InDesign or would like to learn.

2. Continued discussion of Calypso. Students filled in a sheet of notes on the Calypso chapter in class. Absent students can pick up this sheet in the classroom make-up binder or follow the directions here:

  1. Students drew Calypso’s cave based on the description read by Ian McKellan. This description can be found on p. 673 in the textbook or 154 in the Fagles translation. We discussed why her island is so beautiful: 1) it is beautiful in order to show temptation, and 2) the beauty of the island mirrors Calypso’s own beauty.
  2. Students listened to how Calypso responded to Hermes’ news that Odysseus would have to leave. Calypso, infuriated responds, “Hard-hearted you are, you gods! You unrivaled lords of jealousy–scandalized when goddesses sleep with mortals, openly…” (Fagles 156). Why does she think Hermes wants Odysseus to leave? It has to do with interracial/inter-god-mortal relationships.
  3. In the phrase “unwilling lover alongside lover all too willing,” who is the unwilling lover and who is the lover all too willing?
  4. How would you describe Calypso and Odysseus’ relationship? Some students said it seemed purely physical, others said she liked him while he thought only of Penelope. Any way you describe it, it’s complicated.
  5. What is Calypso thinking and feeling at this point in the story? And Odysseus? What are the similarities between what they are both thinking and feeling? Some ideas that proved fruitful in discussion: they both are letting go of something, they are both lonely… Listen to the Suzanne Vega song, “Calypso,” to help you think through it (link below in Day 51).

HW: Read “The Meeting of Father and Son” for Monday, p. 690-694. Fagles Book 16, but I highly recommend Book 14 as well. Take notes on stickies and answer reading questions.

“The Meeting of Father and Son” p. 690-694

Reading and questions due Monday 11/9 FOR A QUIZ GRADE.

This episode occurs after Odysseus has arrived on Ithaca, secretly. He has been staying with a servant and has kept his identity concealed. No one on Ithaca knows Odysseus has returned.

Answer the following questions on a separate piece of paper in order to be prepared for class.

  1. When Telemachus enters the swineherd’s hut, the swineherd goes up to hug him as Odysseus watches on, in disguise as a beggar. What is ironic about the description on page 691, lines 946-954? (Fagles: page 339, lines 16-25)
  2. How does Telemachus first respond when Odysseus tells him that he is Telemachus’ father? (693) Why?
  3. Make up your own question and try to answer it. The question should either be about something you don’t understand or a probing discussion question with no clear right answer.

Day 51: Calypso November 5, 2009

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Today our schedule went thus:

1. WordSkills 3.11-3.15. We discussed such rousing words as metacognition, misanthrope, misogynist, and occlude. Many students offered personal anecdotes to explain the word misjudge.

2. Calypso Reading Question Review. In small groups, students shared homework answers and presented the best answers to the class before turning in the homework. Our answers led to an interesting discussion on Odysseus’ logic when he explains to Calypso that yes, indeed, she is more beautiful than Penelope, his wife: “My quiet Penelope would seem a shade before your majesty… Yet, it is true, each day I long for home,” (Holt 654) or in the Fagles, “[Penelope] falls far short of you, your beauty, stature. … Nevertheless I long–I pine, all my days–to travel home…” (Fagles 159). In each instance, he essentially says, “I think you, Calypso, are more beautiful, BUT I also miss home.” The conjunction BUT would make the reader think that Odysseus would say something like, “I think you are more beautiful, but I love Penelope more.” Odysseus knows this would make Calypso mad (or more depressed!), and, in his “worldly” (Fagles 159) or “strategi[zing]” (Holt 654) way, Odysseus avoids the subject by replacing the word “Penelope” with the word “home.” Replacing one word with a word that is connected to it by proximity is called “metonymy,” which Odysseus uses to dodge Calypso’s question. Cunning, indeed.

3. “Calypso” by Suzanne Vega. We began a venn diagram comparing Odysseus’ thoughts and feelings to those of Calypso at this point in the poem. Students completed this while listening to “Calypso” by Suzanne Vega, which tells the story from Calypso’s point of view. Listen to it here on lastfm: http://www.last.fm/music/Suzanne+Vega/_/Calypso

HW: Read “The Meeting of Father and Son” for Monday. Take notes on stickies and answer reading questions.

“The Meeting of Father and Son” p. 690-694

Reading and questions due Monday 11/9

This episode occurs after Odysseus has arrived on Ithaca, secretly. He has been staying with a servant and has kept his identity concealed. No one on Ithaca knows Odysseus has returned.

Answer the following questions on a separate piece of paper in order to be prepared for class.

  1. When Telemachus enters the swineherd’s hut, the swineherd goes up to hug him as Odysseus watches on, in disguise as a beggar. What is ironic about the description on page 691, lines 946-954? (Fagles: page 339, lines 16-25)
  2. How does Telemachus first respond when Odysseus tells him that he is Telemachus’ father? (693) Why?
  3. Make up your own question and try to answer it. The question should either be about something you don’t understand or a probing discussion question with no clear right answer.

Day 50: WordSkills and Reading Discussion November 4, 2009

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1. Spelling quiz. If you didn’t get 100% on the last spelling quiz, today was your chance to correctly spell all of the words you missed for a 90%.

2. WordSkills 3.6-3.10. Poster presentations and all. Some of the words we learned to remember today by: controversy (would you want a school uniform? to move to block scheduling?), dialect, empathy (feeling like your are within someone else’s shoes), epitome (you are the epitome of cool: I look up cool in the dictionary and there’s a picture of you!), epitaph.

3. Reading review: Obstacles. We discussed the following questions: What are some of the obstacles Odysseus has encountered so far? How does he deal with these obstacles? The next reading will be from the “Calypso” chapter, which is Odysseus’ final obstacle before he reaches Ithaca.

HW: Read “Calypso” p. 652-654. Take notes on stickies. Answer the four reading questions picked up today in class (download here: Odyssey Reading Questions Calypso Meeting of F and S):

  1. According to the description, what does Calypso have in common with Circe? (652, lines 51-53; Fagles 154:68-70)
  2. When Hermes arrives on Calypso’s island, where is Odysseus? What is he doing? Why is this important to understanding Odysseus’ character or personality? (653; Fagles 155:91-95)
  3. Calypso asks Odysseus to compare her to his wife, Penelope. His answer is not straightforward. How does he reply? Why? What does his response show about his character? (654; Fagles 159:231-243)
  4. Make up your own question and try to answer it. The question should either be about something you don’t understand or a probing discussion question with no clear right answer.

Day 49: Subject/Predicate Poems November 3, 2009

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1. Turn in close reading essay. Staple the essay on top of the outline on top of the annotation. Write on a sticky note any problem or concern you have about the essay or the process. Turn in.

2. Reminder: Spelling Test #2 is tomorrow. Study if you didn’t get 100 last spelling test!

3. Subject/Predicate Poem. Students wrote a poem using subjects and predicates to start each line. Since we will begin diagramming sentences this week or next, this prepares students to diagram out the subject and predicate. Students followed these directions to write the poem: subject predicate odyssey poem. All absent students must write their poem at home. Some students chose to share their poems in class at the podium.

4. WordSkills 1.1-1.2/3/5 (depending on the class!). If you were absent, get notes from someone or look on the WordSkills page.

HW: Study for spelling test. WordSkills poster if you present tomorrow. Essay if not yet done. Read “Calypso” p. 652-654 by Thursday. Take notes on stickies.

Day 48: Essay Practice and Writing Intros November 2, 2009

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Today we looked more closely at the example essay  and students wrote the intros to their own essays (if not yet written).

1. WordSkills reminders. The following students will be presenting WordSkills posters tomorrow: Sam, McKenzie, Alex, Craig, Isaiah, Elijah, Jacob, Khyla, Carley, Libby, Bryan, Kery, Kaitlin, Rose, Jennifer Gar.

2. New hall passes (housekeeping). Each quarter students get two bathroom passes. If not used, they can turn them in for extra credit.

3. Examining the Example Essay. Students completed these steps on the essay found in their packet. Any absent students should complete these steps to further acquaint themselves with how this essay should be set up.

Download the sample essay here (if you don’t have the packet): Honors click here: close reading odyssey example. Standard click here: standard close reading example.

Then follow these steps (Honors and Standard on same page): get to know the example essay.

HW: Close Reading Essay due tomorrow, 11/3. Typed. If no computer available, write longhand in ink. 1st period students, your essay is due on Thursday 11/5.

WordSkills poster if you are presenting tomorrow.

Day 47: Work Day November 1, 2009

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Today we used time in class to do WordSkills test corrections and start writing the Close Reading essays.

HW: Close Reading Essay due Tuesday. Standard: 1 pg. Honors: 2 pgs. See Close Reading Analysis Assignment packet for directions.

1st period HW: Outline of essay due Monday. Close Reading Essay due Thursday.

Day 46: Outlines October 29, 2009

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Today we spent the class period working on theses and outlines, since most students had not completed the homework. I had planned a cooperative learning activity, but since students were not prepared we spent class time doing what should have been completed outside of class.

Day 45: DADS October 28, 2009

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Today we continued our preparation for writing a Close Reading Analysis of an excerpt of The Odyssey by discussing the qualities of a strong thesis statement.

1. Introduction to DADS. All students picked up a sheet (download here: DADS) that explains the central qualities of a strong thesis.

All theses need to be DADS:

Debatable: Must be an opinion. To test to see whether it is debatable, try to come up with the opposite point of view.

Analytical: Must reveal something about the text or at least be about the text. “Odysseus is lame,” nad “The Odyssey is a great story,” are not analytical.

Defensible: You need to have evidence for your opinion.

Specific: Tell as many specifics as you can here.

2. Student thesis analysis. A few students volunteered to put their thesis on the board. As a class, we discussed whether they were DADS and modified them if needed.

3. Thesis Statement Practice in pairs. Students practiced locating DADS and revising theses on a worksheet (2nd page of DADS document above; download above) for about 10 minutes.

HW: The close reading essay is NOT due tomorrow. It will be due on Tuesday, November 3. For tomorrow, students need to follow steps 1-4 on the “How to Turn an Annotation into an Essay” Sheet (download here: How to Turn an Annotation into an Essay). The final step is to create an outline of the essay. Students should bring in the outline tomorrow. (Except 1st period)

Any students confused about how to turn the annotation into an essay can use this sheet for extra guidance: Worksheet How to Turn an Annotation into an Essay.

Day 44: WordSkills Unit 2 Test October 27, 2009

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Today we took the Unit 2 vocabulary test. This was cumulative so it focused on Unit 2 but included word parts from Unit 2.

As students tested, I gave them feedback on their Odyssey annotations.

HW: Bring annotation and textbook (or Odyssey) to class tomorrow.

Day 43: Spelling Test, Close Reading continued October 23, 2009

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Today students retook the commonly misspelled words test and continued working on thesis statements.

1. Spelling quiz. Students had to spell the words they spelled incorrectly last time. If they spelled them all correctly, they got a 100% on the quiz. If they didn’t, they will have to retake the quiz (in class) until they get all of the words right. If they get them all right next time, they will get a 90%, then an 80%, an so on, until they get them all correct.

2. Thesis statements. Students worked on writing thesis statements about the close reading passage from yesterday. They shared their statements with the class and defended them verbally.

3. WordSkills review. Some students had the time to play some WordSkills review games. The WordSkills test on Units 1 and 2 is on Tuesday.

HW: Part I of Close Reading Assignment. Choose and annotate one of the eight quotes from the List of Quotes you picked up today (download here: List of quotes for close reading). Follow the annotation steps (either 1-4 [Standard] or 1-7 [Honors]) found on the Close Reading Analysis directions packet (download here: close reading odyssey). Study for WordSkills test on Tuesday.

Come to the review session Tuesday morning at 8:00 a.m.

First period: You do not have to do Part I yet. It will be due for you on Wednesday. You will also have the spelling test on Wednesday. (1st period was attending the assembly about making good choices.)